ATC, Suggestions?

Hello fellow friends,

I'm writing this forum to request your honest opinions on my entry for acceptance back into Armacham Technology Corporation, as an Architect. I've been on Roblox for about two years and I have a long history with The First Encounter Assault Recon.

As a former ATC Builder, as it was called back then, I have improved my building skills since my retirement. Now that I've rejoined F.E.A.R. I wish to restore my activity as much as possible. Although real life has been keeping me inactive, I will make a full out effort towards staying active.

I've started to build a place as an entry, if needed. This place will honor the important people through out F.E.A.R. history.

Here are a few pictures from the place.










Everyone is welcome to visit the place, It is always a work in progress.
Please feel free to leave suggestions and comments for the place!

http://www.roblox.com/Project-1-place?id=38235894




Thank you for your time, :]
Hail Venezia!

We aren't in any place to decide whether you get accepted into ATC or not, bar SONIC. So if he sees this, then perhaps.

Good luck!

I know, for now I'm seeking for opinions, I'll edit the forum later.

Some ruins would be cool, like if you made a thing for F.E.A.R. defeats use rusty metal, moss, or broken ruins or something.

Even though Those do look good. My gut told me to say no. You should try to get in like most people would. But anyways. Good luck.

I guess I should read the forum, so many things have changed.

Sh*t. Accidentally closed the poll. V.V

Woo. Fixed it.

@Doopliss99

Is there anything that I should add or change?

Nah. It's alright. I changed my vote because "No" felt a little to harsh on my side so i changed it.

Okay, thanks.

Welcome.